I made this page initially for an Eva Kipler release back in November, but I kept looking and looking and it and it didn't look right. And I wanted it to look good, because these pictures are freaking hilarious. Finally I asked one of the other ladies on the creative team with me to help me with what was missing.
She took my original layered file and added more elements, giving it a pop of yellow, then emailed her result. I took her reworked design and used it as a visual map to add elements to my original. It was a round-about way to finish a page, but it worked. :)
Do you think I went in the right direction? Should have left the first one alone? The blessing of digital is that you can rework your design; the drawback is you can continually second-guess yourself and make more and more changes. :)